Saturday, May 30, 2015

BIG Fin vs. JAWS

Big Fin vs. JAWS
 




BY Owen



chapter 1 introduction
Once there was a shark named BIG fin. He was a talented and human treated shark. He had a underwater mansion. People visited him every day.The people took pictures of him and sold them for a lot of money. The people fed him every day not a single person forgot about BIG Fin’s feeding time when they did others reminded them and when BIG Fin wailed

chapter 2 trouble
one day right in the middle of BIG Fin’s feeding time.A gang of sharks invaded. People tried to help but the sharks were too strong.They got 8 people hospitalized and 6 people killed.It was up too BIG Fin to save his mansion.If he could not save his mansion he would lose his popularity and die while swimming and nowone would know.So BIG Fin came up with a plan. He would trick the gang into thinking he was food then they would swim out of his mansion and BIG Fin would swim back into his mansion and close his gates. He and other people thought it was a brilliant idea but it was risky.After he finished his plan the people hollered WOW and YOU DID IT BIG FIN the bodies of the sharks were floating down to the bottom of the ocean and not a single person

cared.After the kills they had an underwater party. After the party everything was back to normal.But not for long





chapter 3 lost popularity

BIG Fin was losing popularity fast because of a problem last week. A shark named JAWS came in and said he needed a home. All the people the people agreed that each week that JAWS needed more than a week he needed to pay BIG Fin a piece of food. When BIG Fin was mumbling and eating. JAWS tried to bite him. BIG Fin got away and told everyone that JAWS was dangerous and should let him leave. But the people told BIG Fin we need to see him bite you. Than BIG Fin came up with a solution. He needed to move. Right in the middle of BIG Fins packing JAWS tried to bite him again. He succeeded and BIG Fin was severely injured and almost killed but not quite. He hollered in pain people rushed to see what was going on. When they saw blood in his mansion and out the gates.People knew exactly what was going on .Everyone had their heads turned to JAWS.JAWS was really ashamed.People sent emergency boats to find BIG Fin 46 days later not a thing. After 34 more days people gave up and thats the dissapointment  





chapter 4 death




there were only a few days left in BIG Fin ever since that bite from JAWS thought that would be a friendly present but it was not.After two days BIG Fin was dead.








THE END

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